Nancy's Notes From Florida

Story versus Plot

January 8, 2025

What is the difference between Story versus Plot? A plot gives you the bones and structure for a novel, while the story is actually what takes place. Unless you’re a full-on Pantser, you won’t start the writing process until you have an outline or synopsis for what will occur.

Before I begin writing a novel, I’ll consider the following questions. We’ll start with the overall setting. Where will your story take place? What is the protagonist’s role in this environment? How will this setting contribute to the story?

It helps you to build a cast of characters if you have a setting within a setting. Let’s say your series is centered in Small Town, America. But the action takes place during a conference or a competition at a specific venue. The people attending this event have a common interest. This close-knit group will provide the suspects if you’re writing a mystery.

For a cozy, I’ll choose the victim next. How is the person killed? Where does the crime take place? When does it happen? What is this person’s relation to the sleuth?

Regarding your protagonist, what will motivate her to get involved? What are the stakes if she fails?

Some of these questions can’t be answered until you know whodunit. So next come the suspects. Who are the victim’s family, friends and associates? Or, in your setting within a setting, who among those present had a relationship to the deceased? Which characters have the most to gain from this person’s death? Who had the means and opportunity to do the deed? What other secrets are the characters hiding that may or may not relate to the murder? Why did the murder happen now? If everyone appears to have a motive, which one is the actual killer? Who can possibly serve as a red herring?

If you’re a Plotter, you may do a chapter-by-chapter outline that takes you logically through each step in the story development. Or you might write a narrative synopsis instead. Either one will give you a path to follow and help you see if the flow makes sense. You’ll also need a personal thread for the protagonist who should grow or change by the end of the book.

It’s okay if you’re a Plotser. In other words, you may know Point A and Point C but want to fill in the rest as you write. Even if you have an outline, it will change as the story develops. You can go back and revise your synopsis or outline later.

If you come to a lull in the middle despite your planning, go back and read through what you’ve written. Often you can flush out characters, add more dialogue to a scene, or follow a loose thread you’ve forgotten about along the way. If all else fails, throw in another dead body, have an unexpected character show up, or make an item go missing. If you’re surprised by what happens next, your readers will be, too. Story magic may take your book in a new direction but that’s the joy of writing.

Whichever way you approach writing a novel, plotting it out first will give you a sense of direction. Then you can begin writing the story. Hopefully, this will help you avoid writing yourself into a dead end. But hey, your method is whatever works for you. If you want to start writing and wing it, go ahead. These definitions are my interpretation.

For more in-depth advice on plotting a mystery, check out my book Writing the Cozy Mystery.

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Discount Book Sale

December 12, 2024

As a bonus for the holiday season, I’m offering my entire collection of ebooks for 50% off at Smashwords from now through January 1, 2025! It’s part of their End of Year sale and this is your chance to get my titles at a discount.

Get caught up on my Bad Hair Day series and maybe try some of my other books as well. Go here for all my titles:  https://www.smashwords.com/profile/view/Nancy_J.Cohen

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For your hairdresser – Get her a print copy of FACIALS CAN BE FATAL. During the frenzied holiday season, hairstylist Marla Vail must peel back the truth when a client has a fatal facial at her day spa. https://books2read.com/FacialsCanBeFatal

Facials Can Be Fatal

For your writer friend/critique partner – WRITING THE COZY MYSTERY will help develop the characters, plot the story, add suspense, plant clues, and solve the crime to write the perfect whodunit or to add an element of mystery to any type story. https://books2read.com/cozymystery

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And in case I don’t communicate again until the New Year (my new grandbaby is due in ONE week!), here’s wishing you a safe, happy, and joyous holiday season!

Nancy



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Gratitude and Grapes Wine Pairing Dinner

December 2, 2024

I greatly enjoy wine pairing dinners, and this one at Bonefish Grill met my expectations. The starter course was Pumpkin Whipped Feta on garlic-herb crostini topped with pepitas and honey along with Rombauer Chardonnay. I enjoyed the wine and the honey-dripped appetizer.

    

   

Next came Kung Pao Shrimp fried and tossed in savory Kung Pao sauce with vegetables and jasmine rice topped with toasted macadamia nuts. This was accompanied by Prati by Louis Martini Cabernet Sauvignon. The shrimp were crispy and savory although this dish was almost a meal in itself. I liked the accompanying wine choice.

For an entree, we had Winter White Salmon wood-grilled and topped with cranberry glaze and crumbled goat cheese served with bacon-pecan stuffing and green beans. This dish was interesting with a different topping than usual. I enjoyed it and the Rombauer Zinfandel.

   

Dessert was Apple Pecan Cheesecake with a warm apple cider glaze topped with candied pecans and diced apples. This came with a Rombauer Sauvignon Blanc, not one of my favorite wine varietals as it’s too fruity for my taste. The cheesecake was rich and creamy.

All in all, this was an enjoyable evening.

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Wonder of the Seas 2024 – Day 7

November 30, 2024

Today we arrived at Coco Cay in the Bahamas after another amazing sunrise.

 

 

On the island, we browsed among the native craft market shops, sipped our favorite drinks (a rum punch for me), and lazed in a lounge chair while admiring the ocean view. This island has lots of attractions but Ann and I had been here before so no need to explore.

    

   

The barbecue lunch is always a treat. Not long after, we headed back to the ship to indulge in the air-conditioning.

 

 

Dinner tonight was in a specialty restaurant at Chops Grille. I had the goat cheese salad, the petite filet, and apple pie a la mode.

 

 

That night, we finally saw The Effectors II Crash ’N Burn Show. It was amazing. What impressed us was that it had an actual story. Four superheroes battled an evil villain who sought to capture them. Lasers and drones upped the intensity and added to the fun along with aerialists and the singers and dancers. This show was a great finale to our cruise.

 

I hope you’ve enjoyed vicariously sharing my adventures. Now it’s time to plan the next voyage!



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Wonder of the Seas 2024 – Day 6

November 29, 2024

Today was a sea day. I had my early morning croissant then watched the sunrise. We had a full breakfast in Johnny Rockets.

   

Then we walked around looking for ducks and exploring the ship. We discovered a card room on one deck and a shuffleboard court along the jogging trail on Deck 5 along with a hidden spot with a great view. My favorite hangout is still the Solarium in a lounge chair facing the ocean.

 

  

Lunch was hot dogs at The Doghouse and dessert in the Windjammer.

 

At 2:30 in the Schooner Lounge, we attended a Taste of the Caribbean Tasting Experience where we learned how to make six different rum cocktails. My favorites were the Goombay Smash and the Rum Punch.

 

We had dinner in the Main Dining Room. My choices included Shrimp Cocktail and Onion Tart for starters, Lobster Tail for the entrée, and Baked Alaska for dessert.

 

 

The Crash ’N Burn production show was postponed due to rocky seas. Instead, the six vocalists performed with a live orchestra in a show that we liked a lot better than “Voices.”

Coming Next: Day 7 on Coco Cay



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