Audiobooks with ACX – Optimize Your Novel for Audio
This is part 6 of my series on Audiobooks with ACX. Once I started listening to how my words sounded, I realized what worked and what didn’t. It made me change the way I write. Going forward, I’ll alter my writing with audio production in mind. It’s made a difference in many ways. Here are my tips on optimizing your novel for audio.
Avoid authorial phrases like “assailed her nostrils” or “attacked her senses.” Be more concrete and direct: “The smell of chocolate wafted into her nose.” Descriptions like “his aura of command” could be better written, as can describing food as “sliding down her throat.”
Get Rid of Adverbs
Remove adverbs in phrases such as “I thought irreverently” or “She thought sardonically.” The dialogue should speak for itself.
Don’t begin sentences with any of these words as it sounds awkward: abruptly, quickly, startled, evidently, apparently, depressed, inwardly, ignoring, hoping, wanting.
Be wary of starting sentences with “ing” words or short phrases. These sound awkward when spoken out loud.
Change this: “Focusing on the road ahead, she pondered their conversation.”
To this: “She focused on the road ahead while pondering their conversation.”
Change this:
Smoothing down her jeans, Marla emerged from their car. She wore a corduroy jacket over a pullover sweater, glad for the extra cover when a cool breeze stirred her hair. Fortunately, the cold spells only lasted a few days at a time in South Florida.
To this:
Marla emerged from their car and smoothed down her jeans. She wore a corduroy jacket over a pullover sweater, glad for the extra cover when a cool breeze stirred her hair. At least the cold spells in South Florida only lasted for a few days.
Change this: Inside the lounge, she paused to study the contemporary motif.
To this: She paused inside the lounge to study the contemporary motif.
Avoid stilted dialogue. Make sure that conversations among your characters flow naturally and sound smooth.
Try not to break up passages of dialogue.
Change This:
“Oh no?” Tally heaved a deep sigh. “Maybe he asked them to cover for him. He didn’t invite me to come along this morning.”
To This:
Tally heaved a deep sigh. “Oh no? Maybe he asked them to cover for him. He didn’t invite me to come along this morning.”
Use Facial Expressions Sparingly
His eyes narrowed; her mouth curved in a smile; he pressed his lips together. These can sound unnecessary with dialogue spoken aloud, so evaluate if you really need them. Same for “he nodded” or “She grinned.” Try to qualify these, like “She grinned as though she had something to hide.”
Change this:
“The killer is covering his tracks, but we’ll get him. Or rather, Mallory’s team will have the honors.”
She heard the resentful note in his voice. “You wish this were your case, don’t you?”
His jaw clenched. “Of course I do. Tally and Ken are like family to us.”
To This:
“The killer is covering his tracks, but we’ll get him. Or rather, Mallory’s team will have the honors.”
She heard the resentful note in his voice. “You wish this were your case, don’t you?”
“Of course I do. Tally and Ken are like family to us.”
Identify Speakers
Make sure it’s clear who is speaking. It is okay to stick in a “he said/she said” or an action tag now and then, but don’t overuse them. And yes, your narrator will speak every word aloud in the audio version if you want your book to be Whispersync ready.
Note Character Voices
Mention the person’s voice quality in your character profiles or as you write dialogue. Is it low and throaty? Booming like a radio announcer? A pronounced Southern drawl? A clipped tone? A high-pitched voice? Or perhaps a condescending tone? You’ll need these notes for your narrator when you’re ready to do audio.
Write Shorter Chapters
Each chapter is uploaded separately by your producer to ACX. My fifteen-page average chapters come out to around twenty minutes each. You’ll have shorter listening times with fewer pages per chapter. Hereafter, I’ll aim for chapters that average around ten pages each.
By keeping these tips in mind when revising your next work, your audiobook will sound smoother and won’t jerk the listener out of the story. So add these suggestions to your arsenal of notes on manuscript revisions.
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